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I think students should participate in more school activities because they can acquire more knowledge and special skills from school activities. For instance, participating in debate competitions can improve students' eloquence.Students can learn how to love the animals through setting up an animal protection group themselves.Participating in two camps of psychology can let students know more about what psychology is.Making pen friends can improve students's writing skills,english level as well as social skills. Scaling the highest mount in Africa can test their courage.Also,they could learn what group spirit is and how to conquer difficulties in the trip.

In my opinion,participating in school activities is meaningful because students wouldn't just sit in the classrooms and learn from books.Students could learn from school activities things that they couldn't learn from books or other ways. They include leadership ,interpersonal relationship,speaking skills,planning ability,team work and originality.These knowledge and talents can help students to cope with their duties better when they have to work in the society in the future.Moreover,participating in school activities can help students to broaden their views and realize their protentials.Therefore,I think participating in school activities is a wise choice.It could make studying more fun.

However,I suggest that students shouldn't participate in too many school activities because this may affect their academic performance if they couldn't managetime properly.



All in all, 主語要state clearly

For example, 'participating in two camps of psychology can know more about what is psychology'
Who can know? The students! not the action!
and look at these sentences
I don't know who are you
I don't know who you are
第二句correct, why?
who you are 不再是問題而是'我不知道的東西'
Single: student's
plural:students'
.......I can't come into every detail here,
just read the revised version above

2008-05-21 23:14:42 補充：
by participating in the debate competition,it can improve students’ eloquence
obviously incorrect...

I think students should participate in more school activities because they can learn more knowledge and talent from school activities. For example,participating in debate competitions can improve students' eloquence and setting up a group of animal protection can let students learn how to love the animals. Furthermore, participating in two camps of psychology can help students know more about psychology and making pen friends can improve students' writing skills,english level.The social contact on scaling the highest mount of Africa can enhance students' courage.Also,they could learn the group spirit and how to cope with difficulties in the trip.

In my opinion,participating in school activities is meaningful because students wouldn't just sit in the classrooms and learn from books.For school activities, students could learn something,such as leader ability,interpersonal relationships,speaking skills,planning ability,team work and originality, which students couldn't learn from any other ways.These knowledge and talent can help students work better when they have to work in society in the future.Moreover,participating in school activities can also help students broaden their views and develop their potential.Therefore,I think participating in school activities is good and could make students study more happily.

However,I suggest that students not participate too many school activities because those activities may affect their study badly if students couldn't strike a balance of time between activities and study.

I think students should participate more school activities because they can learn more knowledge and talent from school activities.For example,by participating in the debate competition,it can improve students’ eloquence.Also, by setting up a group of animal protection allows students to learn how to love animals.Moreover.if students take part in two camps of psychology, they can know more about psychology.Besides,making pen friends can improve students’ writing skills and the English level.The social contact an scaling the highest mount of Africa can test students’courage.Also,they could learn the team spirit and knoe how to deal with difficulties in the trip.


In my opinion,participating in school activities is meaningful because students won’t just sit in the classrooms and only learn things from books.Students could learn something from the school activities ,which students couldn’t learn from books,such as leadership,interpersonal skills,speaking technique,planning ability,team work spirit and originality.These knowledge and talent can help students to be more competitive when they have to work in the society in the future.Moreover,participating school activities can also help students to broaden their horizons and develop their protentials.Therefore,I think joining the school activities is meaningful and makes students study happily.

However,I suggest students shouldn’t participate too many school activities because it may occupy too much time and affect their study.