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2008-05-20 2:41 am
這個活動選擇於星期六的晚上進行,由於翌日是星期天,一般參加者都會願意在假期前參加活動,這有助提升參加率,但這個日子並不是中秋節正日,這會減低整個活動的氣氛,我們建議可於正日舉行這活動,一般中秋節翌日都列為公眾假期,這可大大提升活動的氣氛而又不會降低參加率。

這個活動的參加方法是需要參加者到會所接待處購買入場券,以售票的形式可令職員預早得知參加者數目,由於3歲以下的小童是免費,會所只是登記了小童的資料,而沒有給予小童入場券,參加者可能會臨時帶沒有登記的小朋友入場,這會構成難以估計實際的入場人數,超出泳池可容納的人數,造成危險。我們建議應發入場券給所有參加者及在活動當日安排職員於入口處統計人數,確保人數沒有超出法定人數。

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2008-05-20 3:11 am
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this is the english translation for the 1st paragraph and for the rest pleasework on your own.
This activity will be held at night on Saturday because people are usually willing to take apart in activities when the next day is a holiday which is Sunday.This helps attract more people to join the event.However,that day is not the day of the Mid Autumn Festival which may cause the decline of the festival feeling.In addition, the day after the mid autumn festival is a holiday which can also encouurage more people to participate in the event.Therefore, we suggest organising the event on the exact day of the mid atumn festival with the hope to enhance the festival atmosphere.
參考: it's interesting to translation a language to another.i enjoy itvery much but please work it out on your own before asking for help^.^
2008-05-20 10:12 am
This activity is chosen to take place on Saturday night because the next day is Sunday .Most participants are willing to join activities if the following day is a holiday and this will increase participation. However, Saturday is not the day of Mid Autumn Festival and this may reduce the excitements. We suggest holding this activity at Mid Autumn Festival, generally the next day will also be a public holiday. This will create more excitement as well as encourage participation.

This activity requires participants to purchase tickets at the club information desk. The number of tickets sold will allow the staff to estimate the number of participants. But since entrance fee is free for children under three and the club house only briefly jotted down details of the children, it is possible that comers would bring along unregistered kids. This will create difficulty in estimating the number of participants and the crowd may exceed the limit of the swimming pool, making it dangerous to swim. We recommend that tickets be distributed to all participants and staff should be stationed at the entrance to count the number of comers on that day to ensure the number of people does not exceed the legal limit.
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2008-05-20 2:54 am
This activity chooses to go on in the evening on Saturday, because next day is Sunday, the general participants will all like to participate in the activity before the vacation , this helps to improve the participating in rate, but not this day is not day in the Mid-autumn Festival, this will lower the atmosphere of the whole activity , we propose holding this activity on day, generally the Mid-autumn Festival next day classify as public holiday, this improves the atmosphere of the activity greatly and don't will reduce the participating in rate .

這個活動選擇於星期六的晚上進行,由於翌日是星期天,一般參加者都會願意在假期前參加活動,這有助提升參加率,但這個日子並不是中秋節正日,這會減低整個活動的氣氛,我們建議可於正日舉行這活動,一般中秋節翌日都列為公眾假期,這可大大提升活動的氣氛而又不會降低參加率。

這個活動的參加方法是需要參加者到會所接待處購買入場券,以售票的形式可令職員預早得知參加者數目,由於3歲以下的小童是免費,會所只是登記了小童的資料,而沒有給予小童入場券,參加者可能會臨時帶沒有登記的小朋友入場,這會構成難以估計實際的入場人數,超出泳池可容納的人數,造成危險。我們建議應發入場券給所有參加者及在活動當日安排職員於入口處統計人數,確保人數沒有超出法定人數。



The mothed of participating of this activity is to need participants to attend the meeting to buy the admission ticket in the reception , can make staff member learn participant figure in advance in the form of selling the ticket, because 3 persons under the age of little Tong free, is it register materials of little Tong to know , offer little admission ticket Tong, the participant may take children not registered to enter into the playground temporarily , it is difficult to estimate real entering into the number of people that this will be formed , go beyond the number of people which can hold in swimming pool, cause the danger . We propose sending the admission ticket to all participants and arranging for the staff member to count the number of people at the entrance on the same day in the activity, guarantee the number of people has not gone beyond the quorum .
2008-05-20 2:45 am
This activity chooses to go on in the evening on Saturday, because next day is Sunday, the general participants will all like to participate in the activity before the vacation , this helps to improve the participating in rate, but not this day is not day in the Mid-autumn Festival, this will lower the atmosphere of the whole activity , we propose holding this activity on day, generally the Mid-autumn Festival next day classify as public holiday, this improves the atmosphere of the activity greatly and don't will reduce the participating in rate .

The mothed of participating of this activity is to need participants to attend the meeting to buy the admission ticket in the reception , can make staff member learn participant figure in advance in the form of selling the ticket, because 3 persons under the age of little Tong free, is it register materials of little Tong to know , offer little admission ticket Tong, the participant may take children not registered to enter into the playground temporarily , it is difficult to estimate real entering into the number of people that this will be formed , go beyond the number of people which can hold in swimming pool, cause the danger . We propose sending the admission ticket to all participants and arranging for the staff member to count the number of people at the entrance on the same day in the activity, guarantee the number of people has not gone beyond the quorum .


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