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2008-05-19 6:29 am
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The first news article is about 'The 23rd Sing Tao Inter-School Debating Competition' which is organised by Sing Tao Daily.Shau Kei Wan Government Secondery School(SGSS)'s four debate team students participate the debate competition and make it to the semi-finals.

The second news article is about some students of Wah Yan College Hong Kong have sat up a group of animal protection.It aims at caring for stray cats and promoting animal protection.

The third news article is mention about 170 students from 23 secondary schools participated in two camps which are adout mind-reading of psychology.

The fourth news article is talking about a total of 38 students from 2 secondary and primary schools have exchanged letters in English for several months.They had recently met their pen friends and gave presents to each other.

The fifth news article is about 20 students,teachers and alumni of the University of Hong Kong scaling Mount Kilimanjaro which is the highest peak in Africa.One of the student said the African trip taught them many things and they learned to try their best to do the job.

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2008-05-19 7:11 am
✔ 最佳答案
'four students from the SGSS debating team participated in the competition and make it to the semi-finals'意思清楚些
about 後只接noun or noun phrase
所以不可寫The second news article is about some students of Wah Yan College Hong Kong have sat up a group of animal protection
應寫:....is about some students from Wah Yan College Hong Kong who have SET up an animal protection group
is mention是absolutely wrong 的
.....mentions 170 students....注意mention不可接about

The fourth news article is talking about a total of 38 students from 2 secondary and primary schools have exchanged letters in English for several months
又來了about 後只接noun or noun phrase
應寫....WHO have exchanged letters with each other否則人家會以為你拿信去以物易物
**不要濫用present perfect 這是個廣東話的壞習慣
they recently met 就可以

有個"ABOUT"串錯
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