檢查英文文法-----check english grammer

2nd paragraph:
Most students study only in schools.
Apart form learning from books, they can indeed also learn from school activities.
'Acquire more knowledge' is better
about the school life of students who are participating......代替Hong kong students's school life which are participating....
an animal protection group
3rd paragraph
therefore, I have lots of experiences at school, which are all associated with deep feelings
最後一句......應寫above those I could learn from books

2008-05-21 23:33:10 補充：
the other answerer actually didn't do any proofreading at all....

For my news assignment, I would like to introduce how school activities can help students to learn and develop their talents.

Besides learning from books, students can also learn from joining school activities. School activities could help students develop their communication skills.These news articles are all about Hong Kong students who participates in inter-school competitions, setting up a ground for animal protection, joining camps on psychology, making pen friends and conquering a very high mountain.

I chose this topic because I am passionate about this subject. Moreover, I have joined school clubs and school activities in the past, and I really enjoyed them.

My news assignment's topic is 'Learning From School Activities'.I would like to introduce how school activities can help students increase their knowledge and gain talents in other ways other than from books.

Students study in school learning mainly from books. Besides studying from books, students can also learn from school activities. School activities can help students to learn better through fun activities.These news articles(什麼article?) are all about Hong kong students' school life which are participating in inter-school competitions,setting up a ground of animal protection,participating in camps of psychology,making pen friends and conquering a very high mount.

I choose this topic because I am a secondary student.Therfore, I have a lot of feelings and experiences of school.Moreover,I have joined some school clubs and activities in school. I really enjoy participating in school activities.School activities can actually help me learn more knowledges and talents away from books.

*Is this the whole essay??