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2008-05-17 9:09 am
Nowadays, students that have eyesight problems are increasing rapidly in Hong Kong. Wearing glasses and contact lenses become more and more common. Do you know why?

First, students in Hong Kong always play computer games constantly without taking a rest. It makes their eyes usually very tired. Second, Hong Kong students have loads of homework to do and they need to handle many examinations and tests. Some of them always study at night and it is too dark for them to concentrate on their work. Third, students always watch TV and play computer games at a short distance. It may leads to short-sightedness. Fourth, Hong Kong is lacked for a green environment for us to relax our eyeballs. And all these things above are directly affecting our eyes.

How to protect our eyes? For individual, we should not read and study in the dark and we should let our eyes to get enough rest often. We should also get enough sleep to relax our eyeballs and we should have regular check up too. For school, they can organise a talk to educate the student about protection of their eyes. For family, parents should limit the time of their children using the computer. They can also prepare some nutritious food for their children that is good for their eyes, for example, carrots.



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2008-05-17 9:25 am
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Nowadays, students that have eyesight problems are increasing rapidly in Hong Kong. Wearing glasses and contact lenses become more and more common. Do you know why?

First, students in Hong Kong always play computer games constantly without taking a rest. It makes their eyes usually very tired. Second, Hong Kong students have loads of homework to do and they need to handle many examinations and tests. Some of them always study at night and it is too dark for them to concentrate on their work. Third, students always watch TV and play computer games at a short distance. It may lead to short-sightedness. Fourth, Hong Kong is lack of a green environment for us to relax our eyeballs. And all these things above directly affect our eyes.

How to protect our eyes? For individual, we should not read and study in the dark and we should let our eyes get enough rest often. We should also get enough sleep to relax our eyeballs and should have regular check-up too. For any schools, they can organise a talk to educate their students about the protection of their eyes. For families, parents should limit the time of their children of using the computer. They can also prepare some nutritious food for their children that is good for their eyes, for example, carrots.

2008-05-17 01:26:10 補充:
For any school, they can organise a talk to educate their students about the protection of their eyes.
2008-05-17 8:16 pm
Nowadays, many students who have eyesight problems are increasing rapidly in Hong Kong. Wearing glasses and contact lenses become a phenomenon. Do you know why?

Firstly, a significant number of students in Hong Kong always play computer games constantly without taking a rest. Thus, their eyes become very tired. Secondly, Hong Kong students have to do and handle lots of homework as well as many examinations and tests. Therefore, many of them always study until late night, as a result, the conditions make them difficult to concentrate on their work. Thirdly, many students always watch TV and play computer games at an unreasonable short distance. Short-sightmay occur if they behave this way in long term. Fourthly, lack for green and natural environment for relaxing our eyeballs is another important factor. In a nutshell, all factors above are directly affecting our eyes.

However, how can we protect our eyes? As an individual, it is not a good idea to read and study if there is too dark. Also, we should have sufficient relaxation for our eyes through sleeping and checking by optemetrist regularly. For scholars, they should educate and provide information about eyes protection. For family, parents should limit the time of their children using the computer. Also, they can prepare nutritious food for their children which is good for their eyes such as carrots.

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