請幫我修改以下簡單的英文.

2008-05-16 1:33 am

Dancing and playing piano are my favourite hobbies.
Every weekend I go to dance school to practice dance.(學跳舞)
In the dancing class (舞蹈班), I have a lot of good friends.
Every Sunday I go to (琴行) to practice playing piano. (學彈琴)
My piano teacher is a very nice girl, I like her very much.

可以修改, 只要意思差不多都可以.

更新1:

點解有些朋友會用過去式? 每星期都做, 不是現在式嗎?

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[匿名]

2008-05-16 1:54 am

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Dancing and playing piano are my favourite hobbies.
Every weekend I go to a dancing school to practice dancing.(學跳舞)
I have a lot of good friends In the dancing class.
I go to a music school and practice playing piano every sunday. (學彈琴)
My piano teacher is a very nice girl, I like her very much.

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byc8111

2008-05-16 2:00 am

其實你的句子並沒錯, 但如要更英語化, 應稍為改些少:
My favorite hobbies are dancing and playing piano.
I went to dancing school to practice (不需重覆dancing) every weekend.
I have a lot of friends in the dancing school.
I went to a piano school for lessons every Sunday.
My piano teacher is a very nice girl and I like her very much.

參考: Self

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噢!地利 Oh!tria

2008-05-16 1:46 am

Dancing and playing piano are my favourite hobbies.
Every weekend I go to dance school to practice dancing.(學跳舞)
(舞蹈班)I have a lot of good friends in the dancing class.
Every Sunday I go to (琴行) learn how to play piano. (學彈琴)
My piano teacher is a very nice girl, I like her very much.

參考: my suggestion

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