我要作一篇英文作文-題目是講使用手提電話的害處

1)一邊過馬路一邊用電話，會很容易發生交通意外

手拿住東西時閃躲力會下降
口說住話時會下降反應
2)電話會洩漏幅射對身體有害
radio wave好似未有significant effect
3)各地科學硏究所得，駕駛時使用流動電話會分散精力，一旦出現突發事件，駕駛者的反應遲緩，高度危害道路安全
沒錯

每個人既文筆都唔同 所以我好難幫你作
但可以比小小建議你

1) 你可以講一講 一邊過馬路一邊用電話，會很容易發生交通意外
呢個point, 因為呢個就好多人都知啦

2) 第2就講 電話會洩漏幅射對身體有害

3) 可以講一講 電話令到人與人之間既隔膜愈黎愈大
因為在現今既社會 差唔多每一個人都擁有一部手提電話
就算冇 屋企都會有固網電話 我地可以透過電話溝通而唔洗面對面溝通 久而久之我地就會難以用面對面既方式去溝通


**而且你用point1就唔好用point3 因為都係同一方面既野
or你可以試下兩個mix一齊

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