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Dear xxx,

Re : Application for the course xxxx

First of all thank you for your reply.

As a matter of fact I have not attended the HKALE examination, but only attended the HKCEE examination. After my graduation in secondary school and receipt of my HKCEE results, I believed I found my ability and interest in ??? That was the reason I decided not to continue to study in secondary school and attend the HKALE. My goal was to obtain a higher diploma and continue my study in the university. Therefore I regret to let you know that I cannot present my HKALE result to you.

If you do not mind I would like to know if I cannot present the HKALE results but instead I can present my IETLS or TOFEL results, I still would not be considered as a qualified applicant ?

Meanwhile I am attaching my Elligibility Check For, my HKCEE results, together with the study report in my existing school for Year 1 semester a and B, Year 2 semester A for your consideration.

I am really eager to study in your esteemed School. I can ensure you that I will do my best if I am given the chance. Please consider my sincerity.

Thank you for your attention.

Yours Faithfully,

___________
John Chan

如果直譯既話, 003 可以係全部由中譯英
但最有條理係001, 似番封外國人寫既formal letter...


No offense, just my personal opinion

Please choose wisely.

“Thank you for your reply.

In fact, I have never participated in the HKALE test, I have only participated in HKCEE. After Form five graduated(or Grade 11). When I saw my HKCEE result and I already knew where my specialty and the interest are, therefore I choose to study higher diploma and then continue my way to the university. I am sorry that I am unable to give you my report card on theHKALE test, because I did not chose to coutinue studying in Form six(or Grade 12) ,and then go to the university. I would like to ask, if I took the IETLS or TOEFL test, will it be under the consideration, even though I do not have the result of HKAL?

p.s Enclosed with the letter is my eiligibility check form, and my result of the HKCEE test ,also with my current school report card on the YEAR1 sem A, B, Year2 semA . Please read over.

I am really interest to become a student in your school to study. I am not afraid how hard it will be. Please give me a consideration.”


I hope it can help you!

First, please never be too honest to strangers, especially to the authorities. They work within rules and regulations, not sympathy. Therefore, I have tried my best to translate the general gist for your letter. I hope it helps your application.

Dear Sir/Madame,
I appreciate your kind reply, dated 1 May 2008.
I regret to inform you that I am unable to provide you with the HKALE certificate. After completing the HKCEE, I have chosen to take up the course of Higher Diploma instead of completing the HKALE. Would my application still be considered by your institution if I have obtained the entry requirement from IETLS or TOEFL?
Hereby, I have enclosed my Eligibility Check Form, the HKCEE result certificate, academic result for Year 1 and semester A for Year 2, for your reference.
Your kind consideration is truly appreciated.

Yours sincerely,