唔該各位有心人 幫幫手 幫我變成英文吧 tHZ VERY MUCH 20分

為什麼這裡大部份答人中譯英, 或者英譯中問題的人都祗是用(電腦翻譯), 全不理會原文是什麼, 也不理會譯出來的文法通不通, 更遑論是否合乎原文的意思. 這樣答是幫不到人的!

就以這篇頭一兩句, 因為問者用口語兼夾雜英文(這就是香港人說話的文化)寫, 翻譯者搬字過紙照用(電腦翻譯), 出來的英文真嚇人!!


原文:我讀到中學畢業後我 Join 左 x x x 公司做左３個月 sales 過左試用期後我被公司調遷至 Office 到做 receptionist


版本1:
After I attend the middle school to graduate, my Join left x x x company make the left 3 month sales excessively leftist probation period, I by the company to relocate to Office to does receptionist

我 Join 左 = my Join left ?!! (文法也錯- my join 應是 I join)
做左 = make the left ?!!
過左 = excessively leftist ?!! 極左派
to does 應是 to do

版本2
After I graduate the secordary school ,I Join the x x x company almost 3 month to sales excessively leftist probation period I to relocate by the company to Office to do receptionist

過左 = excessively leftist ?!! 極左派


版本3
After graduating from secondary school I join left xxx left the company three months sales left over after the trial period I was the company transfer to Office to do receptionist

join 左 = join left ?!!
做左３個月 = left the company three months ?!! 不知為何'電腦'會放company在中間, 意思變了離開公司三個月!!
過左 = left over ?!!

上面三個電腦翻譯略有不同, 但後段的文法全都錯誤.


若問者用以上任何一個版本英文來自我介紹, 而這份工真是要你識英文或者要在日常工作使用英文, 講完這第一句之後, 相信你都無機會再講落去!

這裡我不是想批評答的人, 因為他們都祗是相信(電腦)能幫他們解決翻譯問題, 而不知道現時電腦翻譯祗能做到六七成, 中譯英如果輸入的是口語化的廣東話, 出來的更不知所謂!

上面一句可以譯作:

After I graduated from secondary school, I joined the xxx company as a salesman for three months. After the probation period, I was tranferred as the receptionist in the office.

After high school graduation, I was a sales at XXX company for three months. After my probation, I was reloated to be a receptionist in the office. My normal duties include admininstration for my department, but majority of the time is spent on phone conversation with clients to solve issues or complains. The company has provided training courses to improve my customer service skills and efficiency. However, due to family problems, I have to resign from this post in March. Until now, I am still very interested in the field of customer service and I hope I can use this chance to further enchance my customer service skills in your company.

Reason:
Since this company is a well-known international company, it will further develop my skills in this field and I believe my experience will be an asset to the company.
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After graduating from secondary school I join left xxx left the company three months sales left over after the trial period I was the company transfer to Office to do receptionist, usually primarily responsible for their own departments to the day-to-day work but the most important instruments of the Lord of the Telephone to help solve the problem with difficult guests, even when many have to deal with complaints of my career, my company and I will arrange regular receptionist at 1 d traning class to guide me back to the customer service department with the problem of upgrading our skills Unfortunately, good efficiency but in March of this year when the problem occurred in my home and resign but I left Haoxiang of customer service to the industry through the development so that your company's recruitment opportunity to hope that the tide has been like his hope that the development of the work can play To their own
Reason:
I would like to join your company because of because of your company is a large international enterprises and I think the company will join the left can be more and greater development space for me the cause of a better future, the future of a better life experience Tongmai I think their own work for me in your company has a good help

Hobbie
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After I graduate the secordary school ,I Join the x x x company almost 3 month to sales excessively leftist probation period I to relocate by the company to Office to do receptionist, but usually primary cognizance returns the oneself respective department the daily desk job most mainly is the special host is the telephone to helps the visitor to solve the problem with difficultly, when many all must handle the suit event is when my during one's term but our company can arrange on my receptionist 1 d traning the class instruction to return me is regularly the customer serves the aspect question same skill to promote our working efficiency to be a pity well is when this March but but in my family gives rise to the problem resign left I to be goodWants to continue is the customer serves this profession development therefore borrows this to know your firm the employment advertise opportunity hoped moist own are liking continuously the work development hope may display own manager


Reason :
I thought I want to join your company because your company is a international. If I can join your company, thought the join left company the meeting might obtain the more bigger development space future the enterprise to have a better future life better experience to me along with me to think the oneself itself work will have the very big help to me in your company.

Hobbie :
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Gradually,be my friend the listener,we will run in the free time.When only one,I will read the book alone.,

After I attend the middle school to graduate, my Join left x x x company make the left 3 month sales excessively leftist probation period, I by the company to relocate to Office to does receptionist, usually the primary cognizance returns to oneself respective department's paper work but most is mainly the special host is the telephone to helps the visitor to solve the problem with difficultly, even many:00 must handle the suit event is when my during one's term Our company can arrange on my receptionist 1 d traning the class instruction to return to me is regularly the customer service aspect question same skill promotes our working efficiency but good is a pity is when March in my family to give rise to the problem, but resign is left but I good thoughtContinues is the customer service this profession development, therefore borrows this to know that your firm's employment advertise opportunity hoped is moist the work development hope which have liked to be possible to display own manager Reason: I thought that the join your firm's reason is because after your firm is between a international big enterprise, but I thought join left company the meeting may obtain the more bigger development opportunities to have a better future life better experience to my future enterprise along with me to think that own work have the very big help to me in your firm Hobbie I will put down clock Italy to lean the idea with the friend to listen to friend's concern gradually I then to turn the friends to listen respectfully will jog in once, if will look delivers a letter