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Also relying on this kind of sprit, Curie & her husband did the scientific research for a long time, and finally discovered the existence of radium. This had motivate the development of science, and made an enormous contribution to the people

Meanwhile based also on this indomitable spirit, Curie and her husband spent their life long time in their eternal scientific research which finally led to the discovery of “radium”. This stunting discovery not only pushed the further development in science, but also presented an utmost contribution to all human beings !

2008-05-13 02:01:46 補充：
Sorry for my missing explanation :

The second paragraph is my transversion !

My words will be as follows:
Based on that kind of enthusiasm, Mrs. Marie Curie and her husband had indulged in the scientific study and finally discovered the element "radium". It has given an impulse to the scientific innovation as well as a huge contribution to human being.
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For comment on yours:
Also(omit删去) Relying on this kind of sprit(spirit), Curie & her husband did the scientific research for a long time, and finally discovered the existence of "radium". This (It) had motivate (motivated) the development of science, and made an enormous contribution to the people (hunan being) .




2008-05-13 01:24:56 補充：
yellow colour = wrong
green colour = supersede