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The maiden name of Mrs. Curie was Maria. When she was young she already established her goal to become a person who can contribute to the mankind. In order to earn more money for the family, her father accepted some students to board in their house. The atmosphere in the house with all the young kids was very lively, but Maria could manage to study without being disturbed in spite of the additional people in her home.

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居里夫人小時候的名字叫瑪麗亞,她從小就立志做一個對人類有貢獻的人.父親為了家裏多一點收入,還在家裏收了些寄宿生.這麼多孩子在一起,自然很熱鬧.但是,瑪麗亞能專心地讀書,從來不因為人多而受到干擾.

Mrs. Curie's name was Maria when she was young. Since she was little, she was determined to become a person who could contribute to the mankind. Her father had some boarders stayed at their house in order to earn more money for the family. Naturally it was very noisy with so many people in the house. Nonetheless Maria could still focus on her studies without being disturbed by the others.

Marie Curie was young name was Maria. She was deternined to be a person who is contribugive to mankind when she was small.Father when to earn more money for the family, he lets some resident student stay at the home.Although it was very noisy as they are so many children stayed together. Maria could still focus on studing without disturbed by others.

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