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I have the honor of being an actress of this drama.
It is a big challenge for me to act a crafty person - Antonio.Although i have had perform experience before this PBL drama, it is the first time that i act as a crafty person.There are many things that i don not know how to act, such as voice,behavior and eyes.
Fortunately, my teacher advisers gave me some suggestion and taught me how to improve my acting skill.
At last thanks all my classmates and teacher advisers for helping me. Without all of you, our show could not be success.Everyone did a great job especially the person who make up for me.Without her Antonio could not be a crafty person successfully.

2008-05-12 23:31:58 補充：
樓上的,gave 已經係past tense 何謂加個s比佢呢-,-?

It's my honor to play in this drama.
Antonio was a creative person who gave me a big challenge. Although I had had experience on role playing before this PBL drama, it was the first time for me to play the role of a person with a cunning personality. There are a lot of things I don't know about acting, such as the use of different voice, action and eyesight.
Fortunately, our teacher advisers gave me suggestions and taught me how to act well playing a crafty person.
At last, thank you all classmates and 3 teacher advisers. Without you, our show wouldn't have been this successful. Everyone did a good job.
Especially the person who helped me with the make-up,
without her assistance Antonio wouldn't be able to show his cunning side.

I have the honor of being an actress of this drama.
Antonio was a crafty person who gaves me a big challenge. Although I had perform experience before this PBL drama, it was the first time for me to act as a crafty person. I don't know how to act on many things, such as voice, action and eyesight.
Fortunately, the teacher gaves me a lot of suggestion and taught me how to be acting like craftier.At last, thank for all my classmates and teachers advise and support, without all of them, our show must not be success. Everybody did a good job, especially the person who do the make up for me, without her helped Antonio can not act successfully as a crafty person.