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1. Someone think(s) that no one (should, not can) hinder other people (from their) right (no - when they want) to accept new thing. (When we use hinder we have to use – someone hinder someone “from” doing something,
So this sentence will be changed to : Someone thinks that no one should hinder other people from their right to accept new thing.
2.If the religion has love, peace and understanding, (no need to use the) discrimination will not happen.
3.Besides, (no we can – change to it can) be easy (add – for people) to accept new things (no, add a connective here – and they will) not (no need to use only) become narrow-minded people.
So this sentence will be changed to : Besides, it can be easy for people to accept new things and they will not become narrow minded people.
4.A lot of Christian thinks that Harry (P, not p)potter book contains many bad ideas. - correct
5.However, our world also has friendly Christian(add s). – correct, it will be better if you say “many friendly Christians”.
6. They think that Harry Potter books still have precious things, such as love, loyalty, trust and sacrifice (add “themselves for other people”)