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1. Do you know who is Harry Potter? – correct

2.Actually, he is (a) very famous book character from the JK Rowling's series of book (of Harry Potter series).

3. He is a (no need to use magical because wizard already have this meaning) wizard.

4. Since (the) Harry Potter (series) talk about the wizardry things and “anti-family” (no a, also I do not understand why you think Harry Potter series is anti-family. Harry only treated his uncle and auntie badly because they treated him at the beginning. Therefore may be you can delete “anti-family” value), so some Christian think that it is an immoral and label (it as) “evil” “satanic” or “blasphemous”.

5. Certainly, JK Rowling (is not, not -not is) only first writer criticized by the Christian.

6. Moreover, Christian also likes to ban these book or films in order to protect youngsters. - correct

7. They do not like children affected by these book or films. - correct

8. Their behavior (are, not is) quite wrong, because they impose (their own belief onto the) children (no belief).

9. It will affect children(‘s) development (on individual thinking).

1.Do you know who is Harry Potter?

2.Actually, he is a very famous character in JK Rowling`s series of children book.

3.He is a wizard.

4.Since Harry Potter is about wizards and“anti-family”, so some Christians think that it is immoral and label it“evil” “satanic” or “blasphemous”.

5.Certainly, JK Rowling is not the first writer to be criticized by the Christian.

6.Moreover, Christians also tend to ban this kind of books or films, in order to protect youngsters.

7.They do not want children to be affected by these books or films.

8.This behavior is quite wrong, because it imposes children`s belief.

9.It will affect children`;s development.