十萬火急,英文作文高手請進!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lala

2008-05-08 1:14 am

要求:In your writing,you have to organize your points and put them
into different paragraphs.
Introduction: briefly state your stand/stance(opinion)
Body: present your reasons in various paragraphs.
Conclusion: restate your stand.
以下為果篇文:
1st March,2007
Dear Editor,
I am writing in response to Lili Wong's essay dated 28th February,2007.
Lili expresses her view that wearing school uniforms is unnecessaey and
I am sorry to say I cannot agree with her.Here are my reasons.
Firstly,(要寫四行)
Secondly,(要寫四行)
Thirdly,(要寫四行)
Finally,(要寫四行)
要寫埋最後的結尾,要用信的形式

回答 (1)

dilemmanity

2008-05-11 3:48 am

✔ 最佳答案

Following is the conclusion:

To conclude, a school uniform is a piece of quality clothes which stands up well to wear. It is good value for money. In addition, school uniforms help students develop their sense of belonging. By putting on identical school uniforms, students' hearts are held together, giving harmony. Nobody would lose his personality absurdly because he puts on his school uniform. It is time for us to realise the importance and good of a school uniform; appreciate with it.

Is this alright? I am afraid that it is not really a strong and concise conclusion... Please forgive me. =P

參考: moi

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