英文作文suggestion 15分

I can give you some thread of mindmapping this essay. But the major part is you to arrange it.

If I write this essay, I would agree with the issue. It is because there is not
many places that you can do exercise in Hong Kong. Also, even you find a
place to do exercise, the location of the place may not be suitable for you. Eg, the place is too far away.
Moreover, there is too many temptations around
when you use computer. Eg, playing online games, watching movies, etc.
Thus most teenagers spend more time in front of computers than doing
exercise. And if you are one of the small proportion who do not do most teens
do, I bet you will. It is because teens are hardly not to influence by the Peer
Pressure. Under these conditions, teens will sink into addiction of using
computer.