5篇簡單的日記（English)約7０字 {10分}

Today, I'm happy. I played tennis with firends in this morning. Then, I visited my aunt and look atfer their children in this afternoon. Now, i will pracise english composition when I see this statemnt.

我雖然唔幫你作, 但係下面呢幾點可以幫到你.

1.Diary 最好寫D深刻o既o野, o甘會容易D想.
2.用D好D o既字詞.

唉, 幫下你啦.

(For example, you went to Disneyland today.)
Today, I woke up earlier than usual, because my family and I went to the
Hong Kong Disneyland. My siblings (兄妺) were so excited that they shouted and cheered while travelling on the Disneyland Railway line.

First, we went to Tomorrow land and played the most exciting ride in
Disneyland (破折號) Space Mountain. Then we went to Fanasty Land, where all the magic appears in front of out eyes. We went to watch the 3-D show
that made our applause (掌聲) bigger than ever!

以上有任何grammar mistakes,請你改掉, 如果有任何錯誤, 本人不會負債.

ok la~ 我讀邊間學校我唔話你知

2008-05-03 21:49:01 補充：
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