1.Recently, our society has more tragedy events.
2.It reminds us that our society still has some serious problem happen on every day, our society is prosperous and modern city.
3.Parent should have the responsibilities to look after their children, but recent reports indicate that some of them are not doing a good job.
4.It is true that nowadays, both parents work so that they cannot spend time accompany with their children.
5.They sometime may leave their children alone at home.
6.It will easily cause many accidents to children because all of them are too young, do not have sense of danger.
7.Although parents want to boost their families’s finances, they should neglect their children’s safety.
8.Parents should spend much time with their precious children, it is because accident can happen at any time.
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2008-04-29 4:37 am
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2008-04-29 2:20 pm
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1.Recently our society has more tragic events.2.It reminds us that serious problems still happen daily in our prosperous and modern city.
3.Parents have the responsibilities to look after their children. Nonetheless, recent reports indicate that some of them are not doing a good job.
4.It is true that nowadays both parents need to work and they cannot spend time with their children.
5.They sometimes may leave their children home alone.
6. Children who lack sense of danger may get into accidents easily.
7.Although parents want to strengthen their financial situation, they should not neglect their children's safety.
8.Parents should spend more time with their precious children as accidents may happen any time.
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2008-05-04 3:21 am
1.Recently, there is an increase in the number of tragedies in our society.
2.It reminds us that serious problems still exist in our society despite its prosperity and modernness.
3.Parents should have the responsibilities to look after their children, but recent reports indicate that some of them are not doing a good job.
4.It is true that nowadays, both parents are required to work that they cannot spend more time with their children.
5.They may leave their children alone at home sometimes.
6. Accidents will be easily happened to children who are too young to have a sense of danger.
7.Although parents want to improve their financial situation, they should not neglect their children’s safety.
8.Parents should spend more time with their precious children, it is because accidents may happen at any time.
2.It reminds us that serious problems still exist in our society despite its prosperity and modernness.
3.Parents should have the responsibilities to look after their children, but recent reports indicate that some of them are not doing a good job.
4.It is true that nowadays, both parents are required to work that they cannot spend more time with their children.
5.They may leave their children alone at home sometimes.
6. Accidents will be easily happened to children who are too young to have a sense of danger.
7.Although parents want to improve their financial situation, they should not neglect their children’s safety.
8.Parents should spend more time with their precious children, it is because accidents may happen at any time.
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