correct these sentences!

1. If you want to lose weight, there are some points that you need to consider.

2. Quick weight loss can cause serious healthy problems. - correct

3. Many people mind their appearance, especially for the summer. - correct

4. Because they will wear less clothes so other people can discover easily (no by) if they are fat. Some other people just want to be healthy.

5. Therefore, they have the same goal that is - to feel better.

6. Losing weight quickly is not the answer because it is not natural. - correct

7. Finally, it does not help us to reduce weight and cause many healthy problems, such as anorexia, etc. - correct

8. The best (no of) ways to lose weight are having a balanced diet and doing more exercises everyday.

1. If you want to lose weight, you need to consider some points.

2. Quick weight loss could cause serious health problems.

3. Many people mind their appearance, especially in the summer.

4. It is because they will wear less (or wear fewer pieces of clothes) so other people can discover easily if they are fat. Some other people just want to be healthy.

5. Therefore, they have the same goal which is to feel better.

6. Losing weight dramatically fast is not the answer because it is not natural.

7. Finally, it does not help us to reduce weight and will cause many health problems such as anorexia.

8. The best way to lose weight is to have a balanced diet and more exercises every day.