如果有錯誤,請改正這些句子。

1. I am afraid that I am unable to achieve my goal of passing the English public examination.

2. I am a Form six student.

3. I must retake the CE English Examination and at least get the level 2 or above.

4. If I cannot pass the level, I will lose the opportunities of studying in Form seven.

5. So I have much pressure during the preparation for the examination.

6. Even though I am not good at English, I always try my best to learn this language. (The correct saying should be : do my best, because when you said you try, you are not saying you are doing your best, just trying. However since many people are using “try my best”, this is acceptable.)

7. The examination is approaching, it makes me feel stretched.(stress is a noun, adding “ed” after it cannot make it an adjective. If you think stretched is not a suitable word, use “tensed”).

8. But I have lots of friends and classmates who always support me, and my English teacher also provides a variety of paper for me to practice.

9. I have numerous ways to improve my English language. - correct

10. For example, I try using internet to improve my English by posting my compositions to Yahoo, then ask those kind (lenient = not strict, which is not want to want to say, right ?)people to correct my sentences.

11. Thank you very much to all of you.

12. I believe that learning English will not stop until my life is passing away.

1.I am afraid that I am unable to achieve my goal to pass English public examination.

2.I am a form six student.

3.I must retake the CE English examination and at least getting above level 2.

4.If I did not past then I will lose the opportunities to study form seven.

5.Therefore, I have more pressure during preparing the examination.

6.Even though I am not good at English, I always try my best to learn this language.

7.The examination is approaching, it make me feel stressed.

8.But I have lots of friends and classmates usually support me and my English teacher also provide me a variety of paper to practice.

9.I have numerous ways to improve my English language.

10.For example, I tried using internet to improve my English just as posted my compositions to Yahoo, and asked lenient people to correct my sentences.

11.Thank you very much .

12.I believed that learning English is a life time business.


I tried not to change too much of your content, Hope it did help you a bit. Good luck.

1. I am afraid that I will not be able to achieve my goal of passing the English public examination.

2. I am a form six student.

3. I must retake the CE English examination and get a grade of level 2 or above.

4. If I cannot get a passing grade, I will not be allowed to move up to form seven.

5. Therefore, I have a lot of pressure during the preparation of the exam.
Or
Therefore, I have a lot of pressure when I prepare for the exam.

6. Even though I am not good at English, I always try my best to learn this language.

7. The examination date is approaching, which makes me feel stressed out.

8. Luckily, I have lots of friends and classmates who are very supportive to me, and my English teach always provide a variety of paper for me to practice.

9. There are numerous ways to improve my English.

10. For example, I try to use the Internet to improve my English by posting my essays on Yahoo and asking people to correct my sentences.
Note: “composition” is an old-fashioned way of meaning “a piece of writing”. I am not sure if it is commonly used in Hong Kong, but we usually call it “essay” in the US. By the way, are you sure your teacher is okay with you posting essays on the web?

11. Thank you very much to all of you!
(Hahaha we try our best. You are welcome.)

12. I believe learning English will be a lifetime journey (or process), and I will continue studying English till the day I die.

2008-04-26 23:56:01 補充：
By the way, you should notice that I changed some intersection words in your sentences. This is to make all these sentences connected in a more meaningful way. I believe all these sentences form an essay, so they should be well connected and should not be treated as individual sentences.

2008-04-26 23:57:31 補充：
Words like "but", "so" & "and" should not lead a sentence. They should be connected with the previous sentence by a comma. If you really want to start a new sentence using words of these meanings, you can use the following to substitute:
but = however
so = therefore
and = furthermore or therefore

1.I am afraid that I am unable to achieve my goal of PASSING the English public examination.

2.I am a form six student.

3.I must retake the CE English examination and at least getting the level2 above. <--- DO YOU MEAN AN IMPROVEMENT OF TWO GRADES?

4.If I cannot get A PASS, I will lose THE OPPORTUNITY to study (NO 'ON') form seven.

5.So I have more pressure during prepare the examination. <-- WE DON'T USUALLY START A SENTENCE WITH 'SO', BUT IT REALLY DEPENDS ON THE CONTENT

6.Even though I am not good at English, I always try my best to learn this language.

7.The examination is approaching, it MAKES me feel stressed.

8.But I have lots of friends and classmates WHO usually (NO TO) support me,(PUT COMMARS TO SEPERATE DIFFERENT PART OF SENTENCES) and my English teacher also provide variety of paper for me to PRACTISE(VERB). <-- WE DO NOT START A SENTENCE WITH 'BUT', TRY USING WORDS LIKE 'YET' AND 'HOWEVER'

9.I have numerous ways to improve my English language.

10.For example, I USE THE Internet to improve my English FOR EXAMPLES POSTING my compositions to Yahoo, than ask lenient people to correct my sentences.

11.Thank you very much.

12.I believe that I WLIL NEVER STOP learning English. (USE ACTIVE VOICE)