correcting these sentences!

Oh my god, how many essays do you need to write every week?

1. Nowadays, most parents do not spend decent amount of time with their children. They simply give their children a lot of money and think that’s all they need. In a ways, some of the parents even use money to relieve their guilt feelings about not being able to be with their children.

2. I think love cannot be substituted with money, and money of its own cannot bring happiness to us.

3. Children need parental love and care because this will make them feel secure and satisfied. Children who lack parental care have a higher chance to misbehave.



4. There are a lot of poor people in the world.

5. They suffer from various problems, such as bad living conditions, lack of food, etc.

6. For all of them, the most basic human needs are not satisfied; therefore, they need our help.

7. Underprivileged people can be found anywhere in the world, even in a modern city like Hong Kong.

8. We should do our best to help them. In return, we bring happiness to ourselves by helping others and making others happy.

9. We can help by donating money or participating in voluntary work.

10. No matter what method you use, you should try to help them, and you will have a happier life.

1.Nowadays, most parents do not spend enough time with their children and just give them lots of money to compensate for their guilt.

corrections:
Nowadays, most (of the) parents do not spend enough time with their children and just give them lots of money to compensate for their guilt.

2.I think love does not equal money and money cannot bring happiness to us.

corrections:
I think love does not equal (to) money and money cannot bring happiness to us.

3.Children need parental love and care because this will make them feel secure and satisfied, otherwise they might go astray.

corrections:
Children need parental love and care because this will make them feel (securing) and satisfied, otherwise they might go astray.

4.There are a lot of poor people in the world.

corrections:
There are a lot of poor people in the world.

5.They suffer from various problems such as living problem, lack food problem and so on.

corrections:
They suffer from various problems such as living problem, lack (of) food problem and so on.

6.All of them cannot satisfy their basic human needs so that they need our help.

corrections:
All of them cannot satisfy (with) their basic human needs so that they need our (helps).

7.Even in a modern city like Hong Kong, there also have many underprivileged people.

corrections:
Even in a modern city like Hong Kong, there (are also many) underprivileged people.

8.We should help them since i believe helping others can bring happiness.

corrections:
We should help them since (I) believe helping others can bring (us) happiness.

9.We can help by donating money or participate in voluntary work.

corrections:
We can help by donating money or (participating) in voluntary work.

10.Despite you use any method, you should try to help them, than, you will have a happier life.

corrections:
Despite you use any method, you should try to help them, than, you will have a happier life.