if these sentences have mistakes,please correct it.

用戶229984

2008-04-27 2:06 am

1.A secret is something that a person does not want to tell others.

2.Everyone has their own secret.

3.There is not a person in the world who does not have any secrets.

4.If the person does not want to share with others, nobody can force them to speak their secrets.

5.Nowadays many reporters like to collect artists' secret illegally.

6.It is harmful for us or our society, especially it will develop wrong concept of our children.

7.Although these reports want to achieve their work, it is completely immoral.

8.We cannot use unlawful way to achieve our demand.

回答 (1)

Christine Yu

2008-04-27 6:19 am

✔ 最佳答案

1. A secret is something that a person does not want to share with others.

2 & 3 combined to: Everyone in the world has his own secrets.
Note: #3 was duplicated with #2. They pretty much mean the same thing and, I think, can be combined.

4. If a person does not want to share something with others, nobody should force him to do so.

5. Nowadays, the paparazzi are crazy about collecting artists’ secrets, and many of these secrets were obtained illegally.

6. This has a very bad impact on our society, especially because it will deliver a wrong concept of privacy and ethics to our children.

7. Even though the reporters just want to get their job done, it is completely immoral to go after others without permission.

8. There are many ways to get things done. However, doing it in an unlawful way is not acceptable.

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