English Composition(20points)

An unfair decision

Have you ever made an unfair decision or suffered from an unfair decision? For the ones who make the unfair decisions, they may feel nothing special (we cannot use glad because people will not purposely make an unfair decision to make themselves happy). However, for the ones who needed to accept the unfair decisions, they would feel sad.

I am one of the victims. The group leader of the English musical, Liana, (No she) made a really unfair decision.

There are 12 students involved in the musical, including me. Only two of us could become the leading characters. The leading characters should be elected by all the group members. To my surprise, it wasn’t! Liana has chosen a poor actress, Melissa to act the leading character, just because Melissa was Liana’s best friend!

When I heard this extremely astonishing news, my heart was broken. I felt the decision was so unfair. I could act much better than Melissa. I could express all the feelings in the mucical. I am much more suitable than her. I kept asking myself what was the reasons. Eventually, my conclusion was just because they are good friends.

Although I could not be the leading character, I still trying my best to do my part. However, I really felt disappointed with Melissa. She was acting badly. I needed to teach her how to act spontaneously. I kept teaching her but she still could not catch the emotions. Because of my prominent acting and skills, I have been nominated as the stage manager. It is quite an important role for organizing a musical. At least, I feel a little happier than before.

Please always remember to ask others’ opinions before you make a decision!

嗯...你改得很好...
可是這件事到現在還在發生...
那也是用past tense嗎?