我遲d要做英文故事分享.唔該高手睇下邊度有文法錯誤,請大家多多指正

唔該高手睇下邊度有文法錯誤,請大家多多指正,如果覺得個句句子寫得唔好既,煩請大家change左佢啊

Good morning. Everyone. The book I will share about today is <The Last Polar Bears>. It was wiritten by Harry Horse in 1993.It was turned into thirty-minutes cartoon for CITV in 2000. This is a story full of adventure.Firstly, I will tell you about the plot. Then I will talk about the main character. Lastly, I will give my opinion of this book.