請幫手 英文作句

2008-04-26 8:05 am
我想寫以下這段文字,


今日10:00 在 ABC大廈 十樓 1100室, 發現水浸 , 我即刻打電話告訴給管理處。管理處安排了工人已進行修理。

Rm1100 10/F an ABC building had found to flood at 10:00. I called the management dept immediately then it arranged worker to repair.

had found 是用 了被動句 , 之後水浸 是動詞flood是否加 ed.

請給意見 gammer 是否對.

謝謝

回答 (5)

2008-04-26 7:37 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Rm 1100, 10/F. of ABC building was found leaking of water at 10:00. I called the management office/company immediately and they arranged worker to have it repaired
1. an ABC building , 個 an 字是唔知你要表達乜? 可用of 或什麽也不用 (10/F., ABC building)
2. was found (passive voice)
3. flood 字是洪水泛濫, 太誇張了, 可用 leaking of water漏水啫
4. management dept, 管理公司唔係一個dept(部門), 可用 mamangement office / company
5. 管理公司 pronoun 用they, 唔係用 it,
6. 進行修理是 to repair it / to have it repaired
(to repair 意思不完整)
2008-04-26 8:36 am
Today 10:00 in ABC building ten buildings 1100 room, discovers the
water immersion, I instantly make the phone call to tell for the
administrative office. The administrative office arranged the worker
to carry on the repair.
2008-04-26 8:19 am
I think both 001 and 002 are correct that both verbs have to use passive voice.

002 has a better translation of the whole sentence. I just want to add that using "flooded" is better than "flooding" in this sentence.
2008-04-26 8:10 am
It should be corrected like this:

Rm1100 ON 10/F OF an ABC building had BEEN found flooding at 10:00. I called the management dept immediately TO arrange worker to repair IT.
2008-04-26 8:07 am
兩個都要用passive voice,即係:
Rm1100 10/F an ABC building had been found to be flooded at 10:00.


收錄日期: 2021-04-16 16:28:08
原文連結 [永久失效]:
https://hk.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20080426000051KK00012

檢視 Wayback Machine 備份