大家好,我想請各位幫我刪減一些word....(15)

2008-04-25 11:34 pm
請各位幫我刪減一些word,令文章能在2分鐘內朗讀完畢!
The story is the reorganization from fairy ttale story in "灰姑娘". This book lead is an orphan, he since the birth, then continuously lives with his stepfather and two with mother different father's elder brother in the same place. Because he frequently puts on the not too clean clothes, therefore all people all are called him to make "Cinder boy". Cinder from slightly on has the extremely strong interest to the soccer.
One a day,his stepfather told cinderboy that he would take his stepbrothers to the Royal Palace stadium to watch the match next day .And while they are gone, then cinder boy must clean the whole house from top to bottom.
After he has listened to stepfather's speech, feels very sadly. Because he is faithful fan. The second day early morning, after Cinder is they prepares the breakfast ,gazes after them in addition the gate... ... By now, he suddenly thought of great idea. So long as after treats oneself completes the work, immediately opens the television to watch the sports match the direct seeding. By now, he wrenched or twist open the television, saw all fans all to cheer for the oneself beloved team, very was happy.
But he as soon as thought that, own cannot cheer by oneself to the scene for them, also a feeling is sad. Suddenly, in the television screen, appeared a gentle old woman. She told to cinder that she could help him to come tube his wish……
更新1:

While the cinderboy was playing football in the football club with his love team, he remembering the promise to his Tv Godmother,ran out of the club as fast as his one boot would carry him.

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That night,as he lay in his broken old bed, tears of joy sparkled in his eyes as he dreamed about the day he had scored the winning goal for Royal Palace United.

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Early the next morning,the foodball team manager c ome in his home. And the man come in, he said that he is searching for the mysterious boy in the pink mask,the person who fits that boot would play for the his team.

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When the first greedy know it after, he snatched the glss-studded boot and shoved his foot into the boot but he couldn’t the boot on. Then the second greedy stepbrother grabbed the boot.

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While he shoved and pushed and heaved and suddenly…His foot was inside. When everyone were happy, suddenly cinderboy stood out of the kitchen.He said that his was a tiny pair of pink shorts. But try as he might,his stepbrother was fat than the shorts.

更新6:

Finally, cinderboy has worked as player and on abundant life.

回答 (2)

2008-04-26 9:01 am
✔ 最佳答案
This is a story about a boy called Cinder, the idea is from the story “Cinderella”. Cinder lived with his stepfather and step brothers. Cinder was also the name of a football club which Cinder liked most. One day everyone in his family went to watch the football match, leaving Cinder alone at home.
Cinder was very unhappy because he could not go to the playground to watch the match. He could only watch the television. While he was watching, an old woman came out from the television and told him that she could bring him to the playground and let him play during the match. Only condition was that Cinder had to return home within an hour after the match.
Cinder and his team won the match and they were very happy. Then Cinder remembered that he had to return home soon, so he ran away. Since he ran so quickly, he left one of his boots in the playground.
Next morning, someone knocked on the door and looked for a boy called Cinder. Cinder came to see him and that man took out a boot for Cinder to fit on. After the fitting he told Cinder that he could not remember Cinder’s face, but he really wanted Cinder to be a player of the Cinder Football Club, that was the reason he wanted Cinder to try on the boot to test if he was the boy who played yesterday.
Finally Cinder was playing in the Cinder Club happily !
參考: Myself
2008-04-26 5:22 am
你篇野都幾多grammar mistake咖woh..
你用translator咖? 你不如自己作個啦..
2分鐘好快既姐


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