唔該幫我睇下我份application letter~~plz!!

Dear Sir/Madam,


Application for the post of Accounts Clerk

Referring to your advertisement on JobsDB on 19 April 2008, I hereby attached my Curriculum Vitae (No need to put current because curriculum already means current) for your consideration of my application for the post of Account Clerk.

I have more than two years' work experience. I am currently working as a Clerk in a trading company. I am responsible for handling shipping, merchandising, data input for purchase order and invoice, and other routine clerical work.

As for my academic qualifications, I was awarded Diploma of Executive Secretarial Studies and LCC&I Education at ABC in June of 2005 with Bookkeeping & Accounts (Level 2) Passed with Credit. I am familiar with Microsoft Word, Excel, Power point and I am proficient in speaking Mandarin and Cantonese. Also, I can speak in English.

The main reason for changing my work is because I have a strong interest in accounts and would like to take a new turn in the development of my career.

I have confident that I have sufficient abilities (No and) to fulfill the requirements for the position in your Company. Enclosed please find my Curriculum Vitae for your perusal. If you would like to know more about my abilities, I can be available for an interview at any time convenient for you. You can reach me by phone at 99923664.
Thank you very much for your kind attention.


Yours Faithfully,

xxx

The letter is not totally correct.

1) I am confident that (而唔係i have confident)
*因為confident係形容詞, 而confidence係noun

2) please do not hesitate to contact me by phone

3) I can be reached at 99923664