correcting these sentences please!

1.Everyone makes mistakes so we should learn to forgive each other.

2.It is true that no one is perfect.

3.If you do not, you will continue to be angry with the person who has done something wrong.

4.This will not only make the person unhappy, you also will feel depressed.

5.If you were the person, someone would use the same attitude toward you.

6.I am sure you would not feel comfortable and cheerful.

7.So try to forgive people when they make a mistake, give others and yourself a chance.

8.It can help you to become a popular person and worsen your relationship of other people.

9.If you can always forgive people's mistakes,you will have more friends.

10.So follow my suggestion,you will be the happiest person.

3.If you do not, you will continue to be angry with the person who has done something wrong.

(do not do what? 如果有前文才對!)

4. This will not only make the person unhappy, but you will also feel
depressed.

5. If you were the person, others would have the same attitude towards
you.

7. So try to forgive others when they make a mistake, and give others and yourself a chance.

8. It can make you become popular and worsen your relationship with others at the same time. (這是你要表達的嗎?)

9. If you can always forgive others, you will have more friends.
(The more often you forgive others, the more friends you have.)

10. (I think ) Follow my suggestion, and you will be the happiest in the
world. 或是
Follow my suggestion, and you will be much happier than before.

Hi,

5. someone uses (not use), towards (add an s)

8. worsen ?? Do you want to say improve ?

9. people's (not people)


Good Job !