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A day I will never forget
i remember that there were a heavy rain when i was three years old. i learnt in kindergarten at that time.it was the most heavy rain when i returned home from school at the end of the day's classes.my mother held me tightly but she made herself became wet and she was catch a cold when we went back to home.i think i am my mother's lover in her heart so i will never forget that day.

2008-04-22 17:45:41 補充：
and she caught a cold when we went back to home(呢句文法錯左,改返..)
希望幫到你=]

2008-04-22 22:16:33 補充：
吾明你個e-mail囉..你個題目系..:我永遠不能忘記的一天..
我作呢篇野有咩問題??