correcting these sentences!15 mark

1. Young teenagers like to have branded products nowadays, such as clothes, bags, accessorize and so on. (Change to branded is better because most products have their brand names, while you are talking about famous brand products, which is called branded products nowadays.)

2. They all think that branded products can bring lots of reputation to them

3.Someone wants other people to be jealous with them and will admire them, but the main reason is that they want to attract other people and enhance their confidence.

4. It is not a healthy concept for a lot of teenagers.

5. Every branded product is expensive and fashionable.

6. Many teenagers do not have enough pocket money, so they may find ways to make money. - correct

7.In order to have more and more money to buy branded products, they may do part-time jobs or participate in illegal activities.

8. These behaviors will harm ( no for) their learning or affect their whole lives.

9. I believe that branded products cannot help people to become an attractive person. The most important thing(no s) is your internal beauty and confidence.

nowadays Young teenagers like to have brand name products , such as clothes, bags, accessories and so on.
They think that brand name products can bring lots of reputation to them
Someone of them wants to make other people jealous and appreciate to them, but the main reason is that they want to attract other people and enhance their confidence.
It is not a healthy concept for teenagers.
Every brand name product is expensive and fashionable.
Many teenagers do not have the money to buy it, so they find other ways to make money.
In order to have the money to buy the brand name products, they may do part-time jobs or participate in illegal activities.
These behaviors will harm their learning or affect their whole lives.
I believe that brand name cannot help people to be an attractive person, the most important things is your inner beauty and confidence.

1.Teenagers like to have brand name products nowadays such as clothes, bags, accessorize and so on.

2.They all think that brand name products can bring lots of reputation to them

3.Someone wants other people to be jealous of them and appreciate them,because they want to attract other people and enhance their confidence.

4.It is not health concept for a lot of teenagers.

5.Every brand name product is expensive and fashionable.

6.Many teenagers do not have enough pocket money, so they may find ways to make money.

7.In order to have more and more money to buy brand name products, they may do part-time jobs even participating in illegal activities.

8.Their behavior will be harmful for their learning even affecting their whole lives.

9.I believe that brand name cannot help people to be an attractive person,because the most important things is your inner beauty and confidence.

1.Young teenagers like to have brand name products nowadays, such as clothes, bags, accessories and so on.

2.They all think that brand name products can bring lots of reputation to them

3.Someone wants other people to jealous them and appreciate them, but the main reason is that they want to attract other people and enhance self-confidence.

4.It is not a healthy concept for a lot of teenagers.

5.Every brand name product is expensive and fashionable.

6.Many teenagers do not have enough pocket money, so they may find ways to make money.

7.In order to have more and more money to buy brand name products, they may do part-time jobs or participate in illegal activities.

8.These behavior will harm their learning or affect their whole lives.

9.I believe that brand name cannot help people to be attractive, the most important thing is your inner beauty and confidence.