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1.I have nothing without create : I will have nothing without creation.

2.This is the most competitive course that can challenge everyone who still have dobut about herself.

3.I want to study in full effort.
4.Study Aboard!I love to see the big world! - correct

5.I had confusion in my experience in design. When i finished my ce test, I got a design job without design theme (senes? I do not know this word) so I always overdesigned and ignored the company image.
(Barn restaurant) Such as a recuiting advestiment, i designed it like a childish illustrator because I saw this style (cancel the word appear, or change it to appeared) in McDonald advestment and felt it was beautiful. Another one-nero design, I made it looked like a horrible and dramatic carpet. Of course my boss never accepted my designs.
It is quite funny to look back at those memories. In fact, i felt a little bit sad in that time.

6.There are too many amusing designs which were posted in the whold world so i haven't found the most favourite. Of course I hope I (will become the one i like. - you cannot hope yourself to be the one YOU like. Therefore I suggest you to change to - I will become a favourite designer that people like.)

7. Biography:Schumann: Music and Madness,Van Gogh,Warner Bros. Although all three books are quite classic and famous but they still gave me strong feeling when i read the last part of their true stories. Suhumann died in psychiatric hospital alone with no one visited him. Van Cogh tried hard to paint but he didn't sale one painting sucessfully and killed himself at the end. Warner brothers were four unified and happy brothers but only one of them stayed in the company finally, the major reason was struggling of power.



2008-04-20 19:06:32 補充：
Novel:the phantom of the opera :

Change :
Mask Men,he - Mask Men. He
talnted - talented
curious on - curious about

1. I have nothing but creation .
2. This is the most competitive course that can help those who are in doubt about their abilities .
3. I am very fond of studying/learning .
4. I love to study abroad and see the world .
5. I had ever experienced a confused design . After passing CE test, I got a design job . My design works were always out of expection . For example, my design works about a recuiting advertisement looked like a childish illustrator . I felt this is a beautiful design when I saw my works appearing in Mcdonald advertisement . However, another designer Neo thought that this design looked like a horrible and dramatic carpet . Since then my boss did not approved (rejected) my disign works .
It is very funny whenever I looked back on this thing . In fact, I felt a little sad at that time .
6. For the time being I have not found the most favourite among all the works with amusing design in the world . Of course I hope that I will become a popular designer .
注意 : 因時間問題,不能全部修改, 敬請原諒 !

2008-04-23 00:51:38 補充：
Correction : expection ------> expectation .