correcting these sentences!

用戶229984

2008-04-20 7:50 am

1.A lot of students in Hong Kong like to read comics at home every day.

2.In recent years, comics are more and more popular around the world.

3.The main reason is because comics certainly can help people relaxing and get a lot of fun, especially for heavy workload people.

4.Another reason is young people even more interested in the comics because they still keep childishness.

5.However, some people are indulgent and become addicted in comics.

6.It is harmful for them since having negative effect.

7.They read comics all the time and can not focus on their work or study.

10.Everything should not be extreme, medium is the best.

回答 (1)

[匿名]

2008-04-20 9:40 am

✔ 最佳答案

1. A lot of students in HK like reading comivs at home every day.
2. These days, comics are becoming more and more popular around the world.
3. The main reason is that, comics can help people relax and give them a lot of fun, especially for those with heavy workload.
4. Another reason for young people to be interested in comics is they are childish.
5.However, some people are indulgent and become addicted to comics.
6.It is harmful to them since there are some negative effects caused by reading comics.
7. They read comics all the time, thus they cannot focus on their work or study.
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10. This sentence is very strange. I think you should rewrite it.

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