correcting these sentences.15 mark

1.All parents love their children so they always want to protect their children at any time.
2.In my opinion, many parents are overprotective to their children nowadays.
3.It is harmful to children's development.
4.If parents want to train their children to be more independent and self-reliant, they may give their children more freedom and guide them to achieve their goals
5.It is a good idea for parents to let children face adversity by themselves
6.Before giving more freedom to their children, parents should educate the youngsters about responsibility and problem solving skills.
7.I think it is the best way for children to enjoy a good childhood since they can control their lives.
8.All children want to have enough freedom from their parents.

All the Parents love their children very much so they always want to protect their children at any time.
my opinion is that many parents overprotected their children nowadays.
It is harmful for the development of children
If parents want their children to be more independent and self-reliant, they should give their children more freedom and guide them to achieve their goals.
it is a good idea for parents to let their children go and allow them to face adversity by themselves.
Before giving more freedom to them, parents should educate them about responsibility and problem solving skill.
I think that the best way to let children have a good childhood since they can control their lives.
all the Children like their parents to give them enough freedom!