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If I have the opportunity to go to the United Kingdom. I would like to visit Edinburgh. You might be wondering why Edinburgh? Well, the reason is because Edinburgh is a fascinating and mystic place. And the reason for it being so interesting and mystical is the Edinburgh castle. Many folk lore about ghosts and sin originated from the area. These story attract many tourist and it certainly attracted me.

Let me tell you the story that have started my obsession with Edinburgh. .Between the 17th century to the 18th century.There is a plague called black plague.This plague ravaged Europe.The goverment inprison all the patient into the old town to control the plague,and did not give any food or water to them.All of the patient who are imprisoned in the old town were dead.After that,many people said they have met ghosts in the castle. Of course, this is only a legend.However,this legend attract many tourist to explore.Therefore,many people will join the "tour of ghost". The tour guide will tell ghost stories while we explore Edinburgh after nightfall. These tours attract many tourists and alit most certainly attracted me deeply. Therefore, I really hope that I will have a chance to explore!

If I can go to England. I will take this opportunity to visit Endinburgh. WHY? Because Edinburgh is a place full of mysteries and interests. These mysteries and interests are all come form a castle which called Edinburgh Castle. There are many stories which are talking about ghost and sin.These stories attract many tourists and also attract me. Let me tell a story. Between 17 century to18 century, there was a dicease called black plague. This dicease widely raged in Europe. The goverment imprison all the patients into the old town to stop the spreading of the black plague, and didn't give any food nor water to them. All of the patients who were imprisoned in the old town were dead. After that,many people said they saw the ghosts in the Castle. But this is only a legend. However, this legend attracts many tourists to explore the Castle. Therefore,many people will join the "team of ghost" while the leader will tell the story, and also, they will explore Edinburgh at night. These explorations attract many tourists and also attract me. So, I really really hope that I have the chance to explore Edingburg !