20 mark~please correct these senteces!

1.Someone said that Putonghua will be an important language in the future.

2.I agree with them since I gradually realize Putonghua plays an important role in our daily lives.

3.I think it is necessary for teenagers to learn Putonghua in schools.

4.Let me express my viewpoint.

5.Firstly, we all know that China is developing rapidly and we always must speak Putonghua at our work.

6.For example, nowadays lots of mainland tourists visit Hong Kong, their coming can boost Hong Kong economy and thus Putonghua will be an essential job requirement in the future.

7.Secondly, English is a very popular language around the world, but Putonghua will be more and more important.

8.So we should have a good language skill of both English and Putonghua.

9.Thirdly, learning Putonghua can make students boost students’ language skill.

10.Many professional experts said that learning a language is much easier when you are younger.

11.So it makes sense to promote Putonghua in all schools, including kindergartens.

12.The government should encourage Hong Kong people to learn Putonghua as soon as possible.

13. It is not doubt that Putonghua will be necessary language in the future.

14.We know that more abilities you have , more opportunities in choosing careers you will get , or you will be a successful person.

2008-04-19 21:57:47 補充：
3. at school
13. Its no doubt
14. We........in choosing careers you can get, or become a successful person.

1.Someone say that Putonghua will be an important language in future.

2.I agree with them since I gradually realize Putonghua plays an important role in our daily lives.

3.I think it is necessary for teenagers to learn Putonghua at school.

4.Let me explain to you my points of view

5.Firstly, we all know that China is developing rapidly and we always speak Putonghua as a working language.

6.For example, nowadays lots of mainland tourists visit Hong Kong. Their coming can boost Hong Kong's economy and therefore Putonghua will be an essential job requirement in future.

7.Secondly, English is very popular language around the world, but Putonghua will be more and more important.

8.So we should have a good language skills in both English and Putonghua.

9.Thirdly, learning Putonghua can help students improve their language skills.

10.Many professional experts say learning a language is much easier when you are younger.

11.So it makes sense to promote Putonghua in all schools, including kindergartens.

12.The government should encourage Hong Kong people to learn Putonghua as soon as possible.

13. There is no doubt that Putonghua will be important language in future. (language 本身不會 necessary, your skills in the languge才會necessary)

14.we know that the more abilities you possess, the more opportunities you could have to choose your career and to become successful.