reference letter校正

Date : (ddmmyy)

To Whom It May Concern

Dear Sirs/Madam,
This is to certify that Ms. F , holder of Hong Kong Identity Card No.xxxx, has worked as Office Assistant in our company from (ddmmyy) to (ddmmyy) . During the period of her employment, her duties included office cleaning, documents despatching and products packing .
She left our comapny of her own accord on (ddmmyy) . We wish her every success in her future career.

Yours faithfully,
For and on behalf of
(Name of company)
(Authorized Signature)
(Title)

Wish Her Every Success

Hello, this is my suggestion:

" To Whom It May Concern
This is to certify that Ms. F, holder of Hong Kong Identity Card. No.XXXX, has been employed as the positiong of Amah in our Company from ? 2005 to 30th April 2008. During the service, her duties included office cleaning, document delivery and be assistant to provide packing service to the products.

We wish her every success in her future endeavours.
Thank you. "

Bye!