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2008-04-13 7:30 pm

Travel blog

In the morning, the remainder of Japan was interesting to say the least. We visited specific sites like Akihabara and Tokyo. One of my favorite parts was the sushi, more affectionately called Japan. Definitely an amazing meal!
Tokyo is Prosperity city, No matter in the daytime perhaps the evening, on the street crowded always. Evening Tokyo, the Tokyo night scenes is very beautiful. The building light to look Tokyo to resemble lively district. On the street automobile shuttles back and forth on the path, likes a row of platoon the procession of lanterns or torches. Let me broaden the eye-opening.
Tokyo sushi is delicious food, The sushi type has very much, the size respectively is all different. The flavor is all different, start to like the sushi.
Akihabara is a major shopping area for electronic, computer, anime, and otaku goods, including new and used items. New items are mostly to be found on the main street. Have many products may find in Akihabara here. The street all is electronic shop. Akihabara the product very is all advanced. Let me broaden the eye-opening. I thought the Akihabara possibly is on the earth biggest trades the electronic information product region.
At last , I return to Hong Kong. I to be very happy in travel. In the travel, I have photographed very many picture, these are in Japan to go through

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用戶125625

2008-04-13 10:04 pm

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Sorry to say, your grammar and sentence structure was terrible... some parts are very difficult to understand, so I have made some changes according to my understanding or your original script.

Needless to say Japan is an interesting city by day. We visited tourist spots such as Akihabara and Tokyo.

Tokyo is a prosperous city. The street is crowded with people no matter it is day or night. Tokyo city is beautiful in the evening as the neon lights lits up; it is truly a bustling and lively district. Automobiles moves back and forth on the road like a series of lenterns or torches. This spectacular scene left my eyes wide opened.

One of the thing that I enjoyed the most was to have sushi - it is absolutely delicious! Sushi comes in all different style, flavour, shapes and sizes.

Akihabara is a major shopping point for electronic, computer, animation and Otaku goods including new and second hand items. Brand new stocks can be found mostly on the main street. One can find all sorts of goods in Akihabar. My eyes opened in amazement when I saw the range of technologically advanced products available. I think Akihabara region is possibly the biggest trading centre of electronic information product in the world.

I had a great trip. I have taken many photographs on my trip to Japan.

參考: myself

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