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Once upon a time, there was a village called The Happy Village. The people living there were very happy. One day, there was a monster called Dragon attacked the people in Happy Village. People in Happy Village were frightened. They wanted a saviour to help them. A man called Billy said to the villagers,"People! I will kill the monster for you all! I'll bring my friends and kill the fierce monster! We will have peace afterwards!" People cheered for Billy.
The next day, Billy brought his friends to the Dragon's cave. When they arrived, they ran into the dragon and used their swords to kill the dragon. The dragon cried loudly and died.
When the villagers saw Billy and his friends came back, they were very happy and prepared a celebration ceremony for them.

候選編號 001 :
Today,I go to the Ocean Park with my friends.
When we are arrive(we arrive)there,we have lunch at the canteen.Then,we go the some ( go to some counters)
counter and play many fun games.We get many prizes.
We are so happy!What are good day! (what a good day)