英文作文 急!!!!

Nowadays, fathers put more efforts to raise their chirlden than those in the older generations.

Points:
- Nowadays, men usually get marriage late and so they are more mature to handle child raising issues .
- They are well educated and to take more responsibility of rasing their children.
- Working competition is keen. They hope their childen can enter into the universities so that they can have a good start in the first job after graduation.