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I went to a restaurant called "喜來軒" today and had a bowl of noodles there. The noodles costed only $25 and I felt that the restaurant was good.

Then I went to the library to borrow three english books to improve my english. Tonight, I gave my father $2000 for the family expense but he replied he did not need that and wanted to give it back to me. I told him I had enough to spend and so he finally accepted it. This is my first time to give money to my family and I felt uneasy.

Today, I went to a restaurant named Hei Loy Hin to have noodles. (Try to be more specific, like you put what kind of noodles...) The noodles cost me twenty five dollars, (try to put more to linger your next sentence..more specific like your opinion in the price) Moreover, the food of the restaurant is quick good. After I finished my meal at the restaurant, I went to the library and I lent three English novels to improve my English abilities. (Actually, your paragraph wont flow well if you put tonight, i gave my father.....that part because it does not relate to the things you have wrote above)

2008-04-09 00:48:55 補充：
The noodles costed me twenty five dollars

Today, I went to a restaurant called "喜來軒" to have a bowl of noodle. It costs $25, it was not bad.

Then, I went to library to borrow 3 English books for improving my English.
Tonight, I gave $2000 to my father for family expense but he said that he doesn't need that and gave me back. Then I said "I have enough"

He finally accepted it. This is my first time giving money to my family. I felt a bit wired.

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