英文書信的格式同改正 ....十萬火急 ......

1.嚮個信封到寫英文地址點寫 ?
答: 你可以咁

TO: XXXXXX
Room xxxx, xx/F,
xxxxxxx House,
xxxxRoad,
Wanchai/xxxxx, Hong Kong

2.我想問我以下禁樣寫有沒錯 ?
Do you remember me ? How are you ? I am good .
I want to tell you about my e-mail address . My e-mail address is
[email protected] ( secret秘密 ) . What is your e-mail address ?
Are you are Chinese people ? Do you know what festivalis the most
important for Chinese ? What do you do at this festival ?
You can e-mail to me if you are free or bored . Write back soon .

答: 我諗我會咁寫
Dear Sim,
Do you remember me? How are you? I am fine.
In fact, I want to tell you my email address, this can make us to contact conveniently without only by letter. My email address is : [email protected] and what is your email address?

What is your favorite festival? My favorite festival is Chinese New Year. It is because I can get a lot of Red Pocket. Do you know Red Pocket mean Lucky! In the New Year, we can eat a lot of traditional food that we not eat most. What is your favorite festival? Can tell me more about yourself?

You can send me the email when you are free or boring.

Waiting for your reply.

Your Pen pal
Angel Ng

唔好意思.改過你遍文.不過你原文裡面大多都係問題.都係叫人回答.你同筆友通訊. 你可以同佢講下其他野.如果係初次交談的話, 你可以介紹自己多d. 但係都一定要keep住同佢溝通.因為做筆友都算係一種緣份黎既.

比個網址你, 你下次可以用佢黎翻譯(可以翻成遍文的)
http://babel.altavista.com

Hi, before I advise you the letter format, I would like to point out some mistakes in your letter. Please refer the below for details.

Date:

Address

Dear XXXX

Subject :

Do you remember me ? How are you ? I am fine .
I want to tell you about my e-mail address . My e-mail address is
[email protected] ( secret秘密 ) . What is your e-mail address too?
Are you Chinese ? Do you know which is the most important festival in Chinese.? How do you spend in those festivals?
You can e-mail to me if you are free or bored . Write back soon

Cheers
XXXX

Hope it can help u la

the 英文地址 is like...

FLAT A 10/F
BLOCK 1
XXXX MANSION
88 XXXXX STREET
HONG KONG


ur english...
probably "Are you Chinese?" rather than " Are you are Chinese people ?"
and " Do you know which festival is the most important for Chinese?"

others ookk la... =]