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2008-04-08 6:14 pm
Last night, Man Chun, Wing and I went to hospital to visit my best friend Spiritual mother - Pooh Pooh. She becomes an expectant mother. how interesting! I realized her as she was student, but now she is married and pregnant with her first child. What an endless bliss!
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2008-04-08 6:41 pm
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Very good but with little......Last night, Man Chun, Wing and I went to hospital to visit my best friend Spiritual mother - Pooh Pooh. She becomes an expectant mother. how interesting! I knew her since she was a student, but now she is married and pregnant with her first child. What an endless bliss!
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2008-04-08 6:56 pm
Hello, my suggestion as below for your reference:
「 Man Chun, Wing and I went to hospital last night to visit my best friend 'Spiritual Mother - Pooh Pooh'. She became an expectant mother. How interesting! I realized her as she was a student. Now she got married and has her first child. What an endless bliss! 」
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