✔ 最佳答案
1. 內容周全完備, 將近無可挑剔。建議可將圖片作編號後, 再把來源出處另整理成一頁, 可使圖片說明更明顯且易辨識。
The content is so comprehensive, it is near-perfect. It is suggested that the pictures are numbered, and then their sources kept in a different page, so that one can more clearly identify what the pictures are trying to illustrate.
2. 有些項目分類不知所云, 應根據實質內容作有系統的處理並排序。可附上大事年表使瀏覽者更一目瞭然該劇團的發展歷程。可對某些專有名詞以如Tao(道)作進一步的解釋。
Some items are categorized in such a way one cannot tell what it is all about. Instead, they should be systematically arranged and ranked. A chronicle of what has happened may be attached to let readers see at a glance the history of development of the opera troupe. More detailed explanation of some proper nouns such as Tao may also be included.
3. 內文和整個研究目標方向似乎不大相符。
It seems that the content is not compatible with what the target of the study tries to aim at.
4. 圖片附上說明會更清楚。可製作一表格來比較各國的差異。
The pictures, if attached with caption, would give more information. A list may be made to show the diversity of the countries.
5. 以獨特的方式來介紹各國文化十分引人入勝。但各國介紹的詳盡度不一, 有些看了仍不知其特色為何。
A unique way to introduce the cultures of the countries makes it very fascinating. But there are discrepancies in how detailed different countries are treated, and parts of the description fail to tell what the characteristics are.
6. 似乎只著重在描述近幾年的事情, 對於地區的整個歷史沿革無著墨太多。
It looks as though emphasis is on what has taken place in the past few years only, with little description of the historical evolvement of the entire region as a whole.
(已盡量貼近原文翻譯, 用詞及文法應該沒問題, 請放心)
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