correct these sentences!!15 mark

1.As a student, I really think that I have lots of (可以改成too much / excessive) homework to do and to (would like to )participate in more activities .

2.Students have no holidays, especially for Form Five and Form Seven students as they should prepare for the (應該係their) public examinations.

3.I believe that the more time and effort you put in, the more things (可以不要things） you will gain.

4.Also, as a student, I can see that (可以加the) teachers have numerous works to do too. （OK)

5.They have more pressure than the students. (Ok)

6.Nowadays, teachers not only need to teach, but also have attend meetings and courses. (OK)

7.Sometime(s) they also need to take care of their student's emotions and lead the school activities.

8.So 24 hours are not enough for them. (如果係個別句子就Ok) 但如果連埋之前果d 就改 (They have so much workload that even a day's time is insufficient)

9.Time (will) never stop (to wait for)us,so we should use time properly.
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10.Everyone has their own (lifestyle).

11.Nobody can affect their choices.

*整體很好 但有些字可以留意*

1.As a student, I really think that I have [a lot] of homework to do and more activities to participate [in.]

2.Students have no holidays, especially for Form Five and Form Seven students as they should prepare for the public [exams.]

3.I believe that the more time and effort you put in, the more things you will gain.

4.Also, as a student, I can see that teachers have [a huge amount of] work to do.

5.They have more pressure than the students [do].

6.Nowadays, teachers not only need to teach, but [they] also have to attend meetings and courses.

7.[Sometimes,] they need to take care of their student's emotions and lead the school activities.

8.[Having only] 24 hours [to accomplish this task] isn`t enough for them.

9.Time [will not] stop [to] wait [for] us, [meaning] we should use time properly.
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10.Everyone has their own [lifestyle].

11.Nobody can affect their choices.

1.As a student, I really think that I have lots of homework to do and more activities to participate.

2.Students have no holidays, especially for Form Five and Form Seven students as they should prepare for the public examinations.

3.I believe that the more time and effort you put in, the more things you will gain.

4.Also, as a student, I can see that teachers have numerous works to do too.

5.They have more pressure than the students.

6.Nowadays, teachers not only need to teach, but also have to attend meetings and courses.

7.Sometimes they also need to take care of their students' emotions and lead the school activities.

8.So 24 hours are not enough for them.

9.Time never stops to wait for us,so we should use time properly.
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10.Everyone has his own lifestyle.

11.Nobody can affect other people's choices.

~sometimes 這個字是有s的;
~ stops to wait for us = 停下來等 e.g. She is doing work, she stops doing it to wait for me＝她停下工作來等我．
stops waiting for us = 不再等，停止等待. e.g. She stops waiting for me= 她不再等我.

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