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Both ATV and TVB offer free service to the public. However,
the image of ATV has long been un-welcome as people are not
interested with their channels. Even some of the high quality TV
programs are left un-attended by the audiences. The main point
here is to draw people's attention on ATV's programs, to stimulate
their interest on ATV, to let audiences have a wide range of choice
for TV program.

Both ATV and TVB offer free service to the public. However, the image of A

TV has long been un-welcomed that people usually are not interested in their

channels. As a result,some of the high quality TV programs are even left un-

attended by audiences. The main point here is to draw people's attention on

ATV's programs, to stimulate their interest in that, to let audiences have a wi

de range of choice for TV programs.

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ATV and TVB are both offer a free service to the public. However, the image of ATV has been un-welcomed. Audiences are not interested in their channels anymore. As a result, even some of the high quality TV programs are left unattended by audiences. The main point here is to draw people's attention on
ATV's program, to stimulate their interest in ATV, to let audiences have a wide range of choice for TV program.

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