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1.People always want to be rich.

2.They think that rich people live without anxiety and sorrow because they can live in luxurious houses, travel around the world, buy anything they want and do whatever they like.

3.Although billionaires need not worry about their daily expenses, they also have other problems.

4.For example, lots of billionaires always work too hard when they are young and neglect their health totally.

5.This causes them to have many health problems.

6. So it is not easy to be a rich person.

7.This teaches us that everything has its price.

8.To be rich is not only about material things, it is also has a psychological aspect.

9.Everyone can be rich if they lead colorful and meaningful lives as life is short.

10.Of course, money plays an important role in our daily lives but it cannot buy everything, such as family, health, friendship and so on.

11.The most important thing is to cherish all that you have now.

12.In my opinion, being rich is not really important.

13.This is because I realized that being a satisfied person is much easier than being a rich person.

14.What do you think?

3.Although billionaires need not :TO: worry about their daily expense, they also have other problems.

5.It :causes: them :to: have different healthy problems.

8.To be rich is not only about material things, it is also: about: psychological
: things.:

14.How about you?