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2008-04-07 12:32 am
1. Most Hong Kong teenagers prefer to use their free time to enjoy their hobbies, such as playing computer games, watching televisions, reading books and listening songs.

2. But I think they can also do other things in their free time.

3. For instance, they can participate in volunteer activities.

4. These activities are meaningful and valuable job since you can help lots of difficult people.

5. Moreover, students can broaden their horizons and contribute to our society very much.

6. We know that most people are not happy all time, but we can try our best to help them and cheer up with them.

7. Someone said that Hong Kong are full of selfish people, they do not willing to help other people.

8. It is true that our society is much more materialist nowadays.

9. But I believe that not all of us want to be materialistic.

10. If we want to improve our society image, the best way is to take part in volunteer works.

11. So I strongly suggest every student to take part in volunteer works.

12. We can change our society to be more wonderful.

回答 (4)

2008-04-14 8:57 am
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1. Most Hong Kong teenagers prefer to use their free time to enjoy their hobbies, such as playing computer games, watching television, reading books and listening to songs.

2. But I think they can also do other things in their free time.

3. For instance, they can participate in volunteer activities.

4. These activities are meaningful and valuable jobs since you can help lots of needed people.

5. Moreover, students can broaden their horizons and contribute to our society very much.

6. We know that most people are not happy all time, but we can try our best to help them and cheer up with them.

7. Someone said that Hong Kong is full of selfish people, they do not willing to help other people.

8. It is true that our society is much more materialist nowadays.

9. But I believe that not all of us want to be materialistic.

10. If we want to improve our image of society , the best way is to take part in volunteer works.

11. So I strongly suggest every student should take part in volunteer works.

12. We can change our society to be more wonderful.
2008-04-07 3:47 am
1. Most Hong Kong teenagers would prefer to spend their free time on their hobbies, such as playing computer games, watching televisions, reading books and listening to songs.

2. However, I reckon they could do other things in their free time.

3. For instance, they could participate in voluntary work.

4. It is a meaningful and valuable job because you can help lots of people in need.

5. Moreover, students can broaden their horizon and contribute more to our society.

6. We know that most people are not always happy, so we should try our best to help them and cheer them up. (不太確定這句原來的意思)

7. It is said that Hong Kong is full of selfish people. They are not willing to help other people.

8. It is true that our society is much more materialistic nowadays.

9. But I believe that not all of us want it to be materialistic.

10. If we want to improve the image of our society, the best way is to take part in voluntary work.

11. So I strongly suggest every student takes part in voluntary work.

12. We can make our society better.

2008-04-06 20:00:59 補充:
Sorry, for question 12. it should be:

12. We can make our society wonderful .
2008-04-07 1:59 am
Most Hong Kong teenagers would prefer to spend their free time enjoying their hobbies, such as playing computer games, watching televisions, reading books and listening to music.

2. However, I believe they can do more than just their hobbies ,during their free time.

3. For instance, they can participate in voluntary activities.

4. These activities are meaningful and valuable; since they can help many people whom maybe in difficulty.

5. Furthermore, students can broaden their prospect and contribute to their society much more.

6. As we all know majority of us are not always content, but we can try our best to help them and cheer them up.

7. Someone once said that Hong Kong is full of selfish people and they are not keen to help one or another.

8. I agree, that our society is much more materialist nowadays.

9. Nevertheless, I believe that not everyone wants to be materialistic.

10. If we want to improve our society image, one of the best way is to take part in voluntary work.

11. Therefore, I strongly suggest every student to take part in voluntary work.

12. We can change our society to make this a better world.
2008-04-07 12:55 am
1. Most Hong Kong teenagers prefer to use their free time on their hobbies, such as playing computer games, watching the television, reading books and listening to songs.

2. But I think they can also do other things during their free time.

3. For instance, they can participate in volunteering work.

4. These activities are meaningful and provide valuable experiences since you get to help many needy people.

5. Moreover, students can broaden their horizon and contribute to our society.

6. We know that most people are not happy all the time, but we can try our best to help cheer them up.

7. Someone said that Hong Kong are full of selfish people who are not willing to help the others.

8. It is true that our society is much more materialistic nowadays.

9. But I believe that not everyone of us is materialistic.

10. If we want to improve our society image, the best way is to take part in voluntary work.

11. So I strongly suggest every student to take part in voluntary work.

12. We can change our society into a more wonderful place.


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