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Nowadays, many people tend to eat few fruits and only drink a glass of water per day. Because of that, many people's body turned from healthy to weak. My favorite food are vegetables because it allows me to balance my diet and therefore allows me to have a healthy body unlike the others.

Vegetables are rich in fibers. It allow the human body when obtain with fibers to turn strong and healthy. Vegetables can be consume by everyone no matter what age they are. It is beneficial, and would only provide people with a good body.

That's why vegetables are my favorite food of all times.

2008-04-04 12:44:26 補充：
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What is my favourite food?
Nowadays, a lot of people eat very little fruit and drink only a glass of water. Non-healthy foods weaken your body and make you un-healthy. In other words, my favourite food must be healthy to the human body. My favourite food, which is green and fresh, is vegetable.
Vegetables are rich in fiber. It can make the human body strong and healthy. No matter which age group or gender; old people, young people, boys and girls, can eat them. They will be injure your health. Therefore, Vegetable is my favourite food.