Correst these sentences~i will give you 20 mark!

2008-04-04 6:35 am
1.No matter how when we are in difficult, we should never giving up.

2.We cannot change the situations but we can change our attitudes.

3.We all know that we realized happiest living better than saddest living.

4.Everything will change when we faced up to challenges bravely.

5.I will give an example for my viewpoint.

6.Mary was a fortunate girl, since she had a happy family.

7.Her family loved her very much as they only had one daughter.

8.She wanted to earn a great deal money to respect her parents when she was grown up.

9.So she studied hard at any times and giving up a lot of entertainment.

10.But one day, she discovered that she was an orphan.

11.She was very sorrowful, but she still wanted to respect her family very much.

12.Although they are not her true parents, she really appreciated them to take care of her a long time.

13.This case said that whenever we faced to lots of difficulties, it depend on our attitude.

14.If you were happiest face to difficulties, the adversity will disappear on day.

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2008-04-04 7:29 am
✔ 最佳答案
1.No matter how difficult it is, we should never give up.

2.We cannot change the situations but we can change our attitudes.

3.We all realize happy living is better than sad living.

4.Everything will change when we face up to challenges bravely.

5.I will give an example for my viewpoint.

6.Mary was a fortunate girl, since she had a happy family.

7.Her family loved her very much as they had only one daughter.

8.She wanted to earn a great deal of money to reward her parents when she grew up.

9.So she studied hard at any time and gave up a lot of entertainment.

10.But one day, she discovered that she was an orphan.

11.She was very sad, but she still wanted to reward her family very much.

12.Although they were not her true parents, she really appreciated them to take care of her for a long time.

13.This case said that whenever we face lots of difficulties, whether we can overcome it or not , it just depends on our attitude.

14.If you can overcome difficulties, the adversity will disappear one day.

時式對不對? ~ O.K.
特別是個例子 ~O.K.
用過去式? ~O.K.

2008-04-03 23:55:09 補充:
1.這篇文章不錯,很有內容,但要清楚modal verb的使用.
2.Modal verb : can,could,may,might,let should,must......後面的動詞,不可 + - 任何字母,如:
You should not smoke. He may go out. Let me see.
3. 不要隨便 +ing ; e.g. She studied hard and gave up a lot of entertainment.

祝 進步!
2008-04-04 7:28 pm
The title is supposed to be [correct these sentences] ^ ^

1. No matter how difficult it is, we should never give up.

2. We cannot change the situation, but we can change our attitude.

3. We all realize that being happy is better than being sad.

4. Everything will change when we face these challenges bravely.

5. I will give an example from my point of view.

6. Mary was a fortunate girl, since she had a happy family.

7. Her family loved her very much since she was their only child.

8. She wanted to earn a great deal of money to repay her parents when she grew up.

9. She studied hard everytime giving up entertainment.

10. Then one day, she discovered that she was an orphan.

11. She was very sad, but still she wanted to repay her parents.

12. Although they were not her biological parents, she appreciated the fact that they took care of her for a long time.

13. This case tells us that we face difficult times, whether we can overcome it or not, depends on our attitude.

14. If you can overcome these diffculties, your adversity will disappear one day.


I hope this helped you. ^ ^
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