英文信, 請問有冇人可幫我睇吓咁打有冇問題呢! Urgent!!

2008-04-01 7:10 pm
Dr. Mr.

Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to interview for the Accounting Assistant - Management Accounting position. After speaking with you, I believe that I would be a perfect candidate for this position offering the quick learning and adaptability that is needed for a diversified position.

In addition to my enthusiasm for performing well, I would bring the excellent analysis, forecasting, management report, interpersonal, and organization skills necessary to get the job done.

I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you. Please feel free to contact me anytime.

Thank you again for your time and consideration.


Sincerely,
Your Signature


p.s 如果想話份工可以比我 學倒好多野同埋有好好發展空間, 另外好高興起見工過程入面testing 我有唔明佢耐心教我...令我覺得如果可以加入佢工司...相信可以學倒如多野...

因為我好想講話我好有誠意同埋好對份工好有興趣..知道份工可能有需要好有耐性同成日加班...但我唔怕辛苦同壓力....因為份工可以學倒更加深入嘅野....

Thank

回答 (3)

2008-04-01 8:21 pm
✔ 最佳答案
這類信應力求精簡,要 show confidence之同時,要寫出請你對公司有什麼好處。
恕小弟冒眛,改寫閣下大作,以兹參考:
Dear Mr. XXX
I would like to express my sincere thanks for your interviewing me (say when) for the post of Accounting Assistant - Management Accounting. Our conversations prompted me to believe that I am the ideal candidate for this position.
In addition to my proactive attitude to strive for performance, I possess excellent analytical, interpersonal and organising skills. Furthermore, my excellence in forecasting and management reporting would enable me to contribute considerably to your company.


I am very interested in working in your company and look forward to hearing from you soon. In the meantime, should you need any further information about my credentials, please feel free to contact me anytime.

Thank you again for your time and kind consideration.


Sincerely,
Signature


2008-04-01 13:11:54 補充:
你講得太多我如何如何冇用架,你要嘅係解釋佢點解要請你。

2008-04-01 13:17:10 補充:
salutation千萬不要寫Dear Sir,沒有任何一個稱謂比自己的名字更親切。何況你見過佢!
2008-04-01 8:43 pm
Dr. Sir,

Thank you for giving me the opportunity of interview for the post of Accounting Assistant in Management Accounting. After attending the interview, I am much interested in the diversified duties and am well prepared for working overtime, with patience and under pressure. I am highly confident of being the right person for the post.

I am looking forward to hearing the result of the interview.


Yours faithfully,
(Signature)
2008-04-01 7:33 pm
- After spoke with you
- that is needs for a diversified
- I am very interesting to work for you
- hear from you

ps: this job gives me a lot of chance to progress and i appreciate a lot the helps from the people at the meeting. I believe I can lead much more with this job. I know this job needs patience and some over time, but I can support the stress.


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